SoyBooru
lifesucksthenyoudie - Reply
>I've taken the extreme step of joining to let you guys know that the quality of your recent fanfics has really dropped off lately, and frankly, I'm disappointed.
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>The quoted post is not bad. It's got a couple key elements, like stuff I never said and stuff I never did, but what the fuck is this "I hope he doesn't fuck up his mouth" bullraisin? I shouldn't have to tell you guys how to milk lolcows.
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>The 'edge' that I've come to expect is completely missing. Here are some helpful suggestions:
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>- "he sound(s) different"? Needs to go much harder at the impact on my appearance and enunciation
>- needs something about being chaded by my dom wife
>- needs more speculation about my failing business - something about desperation
>- complete lack of slurs. You're anonymous and there's no consequences. You know you want to do it.
PRIZINS - Reply