Please give me criticism to my ongezellig plot idea. (WARNING: WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS AND SNCA!!!)

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1 week ago#2225912
Note this is meant to be the framework of an animated episode not a book so read it as such. Also the excessive commentary, notes, and explanation are mostly there so I can remember stuff. But also because I like to ask an ai what it thinks about my plot out of curiosity. so it’s also there so ai can fully grasp my vision for the episode. Ai did not write this or help me with most of the criticism but I did have ai fix my grammar bc I’m super duper lazy. So yea here’s the plot idea please read it and give me your thoughts! >>the plot<<
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Ultraman

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1 week ago#2225930
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1 week ago#2225935
Ultraman
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I will rape you nigga
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Ultraman

Ỏ̷͖͈̞̩͎̻̫̫̜͉̠̫͕̭̭̫̫̹̗̹͈̼̠̖͍͚̥͈̮̼͕̠̤̯̻̥̬̗̼̳̤̳̬̪̹͚̞̼̠͕̼̠̦͚Ỏ̷͖͈̞̩͎̻̫̫̜͉̠̫͕̭̭̫̫̹̗̹͈̼̠̖͍͚̥͈̮̼͕̠̤̯̻̥̬̗̼̳̤̳

1 week ago#2225941
>I will rape you nigga
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applejuice

abble jooz

1 week ago#2225948
I never watched Ongezellig
1 week ago#2225959
applejuice
I never watched Ongezellig
Watch it. It’s high art!
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applejuice

abble jooz

1 week ago#2226020
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applejuice
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I never watched Ongezellig
Watch it. It’s high art!
I’m watching it, I’ll come back so I have an opinion on it
1 week ago#2226049
applejuice
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Watch it. It’s high art!
I’m watching it, I’ll come back so I have an opinion on it
Make sure you pay attention! There’s a lot of details in the animation!
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NasalCrook

NasalCrook

1 week ago#2226059
i was about to call this uberautism but then remembered im a mlp fan
1 week ago#2226095
NasalCrook
i was about to call this uberautism but then remembered im a mlp fan
>Mlp niggers in the soysphere
Jsit…
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NasalCrook

NasalCrook

1 week ago#2226130
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i was about to call this uberautism but then remembered im a mlp fan
>Mlp niggers in the soysphere
Jsit…
if it makes you feel better im not sexually attracted to the ponies in any way nor do i have any bizarre fetishes which is something I can’t say for half of the forum users on this site
1 week ago#2226138
NasalCrook
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>Mlp niggers in the soysphere
Jsit…
if it makes you feel better im not sexually attracted to the ponies in any way nor do i have any bizarre fetishes which is something I can’t say for half of the forum users on this site
Yea your right it could be worse
1 week ago#2226905
>no one has given any criticism what so ever
Nigga..
1 week ago#2226914
Is it porn
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helichadian

CAPE VERDE WON

1 week ago#2226922
chatgpt, summarize it for me
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helichadian

CAPE VERDE WON

1 week ago#2230260
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Is it porn
No
1 week ago#2230261
helichadian
chatgpt, summarize it for me
Just copy and paste it to gpt and tell me your thoughts nigga
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Vergilius

O Fortuna, velut luna, statu variabilis

1 week ago#2230263
You look like a faggot
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John8_44

haiii 🤭

1 week ago#2230265
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Is it porn
Yes
:concerned:
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